Story Diagnostic

Best for: Writers who have a completed manuscript and know something isn't working, but aren't sure what.

Includes:

  • Full manuscript read

  • Editorial letter

  • Big-picture feedback

  • Plot analysis

  • Character analysis

  • Pacing analysis

  • Strengths and weaknesses

  • Revision roadmap

  • Prioritized next steps

Does NOT include:

  • In-manuscript comments

  • Line edits

  • Grammar corrections

Starting at $600*

* Final pricing is based on manuscript length with most projects quoted by word count.

Developmental Edit

Best for: Writers ready for deeper revision and detailed feedback.

Includes:

  • Full manuscript read

  • Editorial letter

  • In-manuscript comments

  • Plot feedback

  • Structure feedback

  • Character arc feedback

  • Pacing feedback

  • Scene-level observations

  • Questions and suggestions throughout manuscript

Does NOT include:

  • Full copyedit

  • Proofreading

Starting at $1,200*

* Final pricing is based on manuscript length with most projects quoted by word count.

First 50 Pages Critique

Best for: Writers preparing to query, self-publish, or revise before investing in a full manuscript edit.

Includes:

  • Read of first 50 pages

  • In-manuscript comments

  • Editorial summary

  • Feedback on opening hook

  • Character introductions

  • Pacing

  • Stakes

  • Voice

  • Reader engagement

Could optionally include:

  • Short revision roadmap

Starting at $250